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for Gela Temporem

by MrsTaraYuyMaxwell

person Bookworm51485
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually really hate stories where Snape is pregnant, but this actually sounds good to me. So I hope you do continue.
person swirly
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start. you should definitely continue. Slash yes. Maybe pair Snape with Remus. ^.^
person SageSnape
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I believe that you should continue this story that could end out wonderfully. You know that you could have Harry, Ron,Hermione,Draco & his two gards in that same class in seventh year potions class when that something happens with the potion that could be the couse of Longbottem. I dont know just an idea.
person Kaz
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Please continue this, it's such an interesting idea for a fic. As to should it be yaoi or not, why not make Snape bi with a potential male and female partner. That would give you lots of 'who will/won't understand' drama should you need it.
person Elena
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should continue. I like it alot. If it keeps going like this it won't matter what the pairings are. Update soon.
person andie
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think you should continue! It is a nice plot, there are many possibilities... About pairing: I lwould preffer and like to see Remus with Snape; Harry could be, but I see more in Remus for this story. It also could be really interesting with Draco, if you want to use HBP, they could be hidden somewhere - there could be a very difficult time for pureblood Draco to accept a bastard child. No woman, please :-) I dont like an idea of pregnant man in F/M pair. I like a little anger (no too easy way to love) and thoughts...

But it is all your decition, it depends on your ideas. I am looking forward to next chapters, this story could be really good.
person Shannon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this sounds like an interesting start to a story. I would like to know what happens next, so please continue this story!!
person Tissy
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it!^^ and yes you should definitly continue! A for the pairing, I like Harry/snape the best but that's just me. I thought you did a good job of writing it to.

Again I really hope you continue this!^^
person angel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Duse, I would like to know more please. . . you left on kind of a cliff hanger, not fun cues the amount of them is getting cleshay!

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