rate_review Reviews

I would like to read some more of this:)

nice start, me myself, I'm partial to a snape/lupin or a snape/black story, I guess it really depends on who you like best. keep writing I can't wait to see who you pair the fabulous potions master up with.

please please keep this up! This is one of the more interesting mpreg beginnings I've come across, and I would HATE to see it come to naught!!
Absolutely needs yaoi pairing, though. if there is one annoying thing in this world, its mpreg with het pairings *growls* Who, however...hmmm....that ones a toughy...I honestly couldn't say. But I do think you should go for yaoi pairings ^-^
overall I think its a great start. the writing is good, and it has no glaring errors. I absolutely am anxious for more!