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for In the Closet

by bellgirl

person whogirl
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Ooh! I'm reviewing! Now please post the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story! I especially love this smart, observant, and lesbian Pansy. It's wonderful that Draco's not admitting it, and that Pansy is in fact cunning! Thanks heaps, and hope you keep updating!
person Pastel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I wonder if Pansy is going to tell Draco about how she got a glimps of Hermione's panties. Update soon please.
person rox4787
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it so far cant wait to read more
person fiona
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this i can't wait for the next chapter!!
person challenger
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey sweets! i love it. it's fun and well written. lol and no i am not just saying that cause we're friends you know how i feel about how you write i wish i could be that good but i guess i have my own things i'm good at, right? lol anyway i know i have to wait like everyone else for the rest of this and if it doesn't go over well like you said i get to read the rest anyway if you pull it since i did challenge you. But i love it so far! i know you said that you were busy for the next few days with other stuff, like the next chapter on your other story which i can't wait to read, but could you please put up the next if you are happy with it. 7 and 10 were the ones you said were the ones you were reworking so i think it would be alright to put up 3 i know i wouldn't be the only one who would love it! please? well i'll check later for it. bother bother bother lol love ya til l8r.
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe.
person Jen
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucky me, I'm the first to review. I think the new twist is interesting.
Can't wait to see where you take it. I hope you can update soon.
BTW, I absolutely love your other story, 'Last Request.'
person Patronuscharm2
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gerat job! i love it! please update soon! this is fantastic! its so different then most and im curious to see how it will develope. update soon!
person mona
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute! i love the way you write you really are good at it i really enjoyed this and i can't wait to see what happens! good job so far! :)

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