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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are officially an evil, evil person! LOL C'mon...you can't leave us hanging like that! It'd be too cruel!
Keep up the good work...I really can't wait to see where this one is going!
Keep up the good work...I really can't wait to see where this one is going!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I almost forgot...
Gracie dear, you really need to learn the fine art of constructive criticism. If you are willing to point out flaws and the like in certain stories, then you should do it in a friendly, respectful manner. Coming right out and telling someone that they "need to get a new Beta" comes off as a bit harsh.
As to your opinion of the story itself, well, everyone's got an opinion and are free to express them. However, if you don't particularly care for the story and find it difficult to read, then why bother coming back to it? Just a question mind you. It's just a pet peeve of mine that when I see someone reviewing a story multiple times after having first voiced their opinion that it was only "okay" or that it was "difficult to read", I have to wonder why bother coming back to it at all?
I have my minor in Journalism and quite honestly, aside from the occasional glitch that aff.net throws in to different chapters, I see nothing wrong with the way this story is written. But, as I said before everyone has an opinion and they're entitled to it. I just felt the need to voice mine on this particular subject matter.
For the author and the beta: Fantastic job! Keep up the great work and I appreciate all the effort that has been put forth thus far in creating an enjoyable reading experience!-
Gracie dear, you really need to learn the fine art of constructive criticism. If you are willing to point out flaws and the like in certain stories, then you should do it in a friendly, respectful manner. Coming right out and telling someone that they "need to get a new Beta" comes off as a bit harsh.
As to your opinion of the story itself, well, everyone's got an opinion and are free to express them. However, if you don't particularly care for the story and find it difficult to read, then why bother coming back to it? Just a question mind you. It's just a pet peeve of mine that when I see someone reviewing a story multiple times after having first voiced their opinion that it was only "okay" or that it was "difficult to read", I have to wonder why bother coming back to it at all?
I have my minor in Journalism and quite honestly, aside from the occasional glitch that aff.net throws in to different chapters, I see nothing wrong with the way this story is written. But, as I said before everyone has an opinion and they're entitled to it. I just felt the need to voice mine on this particular subject matter.
For the author and the beta: Fantastic job! Keep up the great work and I appreciate all the effort that has been put forth thus far in creating an enjoyable reading experience!-
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gracie,
Thank you for your examples from the previous chapters. I should have reserved my questions until I received clarification from you as to what chapters you were referring to. I think I can make out most of the review you left in between the miscellaneous characters inserted by what I assume is your word processor.:)
I have signed on to be Bellgirl's Beta though I have only reviewed chapter 7 and will go over the previous chapters to correct those errors which I wholeheartedly agree are incorrect and need correction. Alas they were not reviewed by me and I should have clarified that with you first.
I do indeed have a degree in English and I am currently working on my Master
Thank you for your examples from the previous chapters. I should have reserved my questions until I received clarification from you as to what chapters you were referring to. I think I can make out most of the review you left in between the miscellaneous characters inserted by what I assume is your word processor.:)
I have signed on to be Bellgirl's Beta though I have only reviewed chapter 7 and will go over the previous chapters to correct those errors which I wholeheartedly agree are incorrect and need correction. Alas they were not reviewed by me and I should have clarified that with you first.
I do indeed have a degree in English and I am currently working on my Master
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NUH END!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!!!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i really liked it..i hope u update soon..dont let milton find out let pansy enjoy her night
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter yet! I'm very excited to hear that you have a couple more chapters to upload still. When will those be coming out, soon I hope?? I like your characterization of Hermione, she's not as stuck up as many other authors portray her. Please be swift with the next chapters, I want to know what happens!!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was such a great chapter, honestly this is a really creative and fun story, update soon please!!!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well well well. What do we have here? What
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story, I love everything about it. Keep it up, it's excellent.