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Okay!  That’s one helluva start to a story!  So, I move anxiously along to page/chapter 2, and...nothing. Except, of course, an author’s note promising an improved, edited update.  Okay, I’ve seen that before, let’s see where and how they pick up the story on page/chapter 3...but that’s just another note promising an edited update.  I’m disappointed, not by what was available to read, which was very good, but by what’s missing, which I would really like to read.  How about it?  Did you give up? Post it elsewhere?  I think this is a story worth finishing!