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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really really good! Very enjoyable one shot - but I want to know what happens next!
Please consider writing more or doing a sequel???
Please consider writing more or doing a sequel???
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could you maybe do a short epilgoue to let us know if they end up together or if one of them dies or both die. pretty plz. it was a good story.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welldone My Dear! I love it. Wish it wasn't a one shot! :) Good job though!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that she sorta de-virginized herself with the thrusting up.
Great one shot but I'd love to know if they made it through the battle.
I rather it when they either both die or both live. Just one surviving hurts me so much....
Great one shot but I'd love to know if they made it through the battle.
I rather it when they either both die or both live. Just one surviving hurts me so much....
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awe! there should be more to this! i don't know how i would continue it but hopefully you have some idea! so please, please add something to this!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. Works great as a one shot. I can just imagine that they both lived and had many nights together. Thanks for sharing.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent one shot! However, I would be happy to see another story based on this depicting them after the war.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you really want to know what I think? OK here it goes. I think that this is bloody brilliant and if you have never done a "one shot" before, I really don't think this is the time to start. Well done and keep writing!
Toodles.
Toodles.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LUV IT!!! Please Add more, and let them live and have more happiness and love!!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot! Extreamly hot! The title reminds me of the song of the same name by Garth Brooks. The song was running through my head as I was reading this. Well done!