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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is a great plan. I can't wait for the next update!
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent and original story. Keep up the great work.
Love Sonia :)
Love Sonia :)
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this so far!
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May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY SO GOOD AMAZING WRITING PLEASE WRITE MORE
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April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Love Snape and Hermione, as always!
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So i just read the story and am loving it! I am not normally a fan of virgin Snape Stories, cause I like my Severus to be a master in more than just potions... lol But your story is perfect! I am glad I gave this one a chance!
I can't wait to see if i am right about Draco being the traitor! Please update soon!
I can't wait to see if i am right about Draco being the traitor! Please update soon!
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, love how you pulled each of the elements together and having lucius talking with Draco giving it more depth. Can't wait to read the next chapter. only thing I would point out is the astonished look of astonishment. If you just have "astonished look" or "look of astonishment" it will read better. :)
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The "Serpent who does not know a woman's love" is Draco, isn't it? Great update!
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I should REALLY be in bed, but I couldn't read and not review. That wouldn't be nice of me, would it? lol So, to keep it short and sweet... a great plan, nice execution, I love Hagrid, I don't like Draco, I REALLY dislike Lucius, and I can't wait for them to declare themselves finally!
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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! I really like the cute interactions between the two of them as she gets him to lower is defenses ad the lemon scenes are smoking hot.