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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 31 - ooh, she can wear The Dress each time she wants it this way....
person angel
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. that was awesome ...please more .. later for now

angel
person snapeslave
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg...what an evily wonderful cliffie..lol...please tell me you are getting ready to post the next update soon...i know it be an ass-tounding chapter....lol...keep up the good work...
person Anguloce
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww......so sweet....
person lotus
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EW! gross! but so deserved. Poor Hermione!
person Ladytalon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus goes all "Spanish Inquisition" on Wayne 'n' Dwayne! Watch out for the comfy chair, boys...

BTW, since these guys are wearing masks...in your last story, where Sev gets a half-mask from Hermione? I always meant to tell you that I all I could picture in my head was "The Gimp" from Pulp Fiction, I couldn't really imagine Severus in it, lol. A

nyways, that's one thing I love about your story: hot sex and a vengeful Severus. Two! Two things I love about your story....
person beeky63
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ms. Figg, sorry that I haven't reviewed for a while but real life has been a bit hectic. On a good note my hubby was sworn in as a Canadian citizen today.
As usual this story is excellent and erotic as hell. I am so loving it, however you should be tied up and whipped by a potions master for that pun. Lol!
Toodles.
person mekareami
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the description of the revenge he plans... To the pain and then some :)

Great story (as usual) Thank you for writing
person JTBJAB
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny! And Hermione really should have thought about the consequences! Lol!
person JW
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 27-30 - I like Denise; I hope she finds someone special for her own. Thanks for the Draco ending; I am guessing Voldemort was quite happy to not have to deal with adolescent Draco, but still got his money. So Hermione never feared that Wayne/Dwayne would return? (I assume Severus never told her exactly what he did - or did she guess it was them when she read the news article about the two dead bodies?) And what the heck is Harry Potter doing all these years?!?! BTW, I like your ring wand; I've been thinking of that for a while, as it makes sense to have a second wand that's impossible to drop and hard to lose. Let's hope she makes Severus his own ring wand!

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