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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12-14 Well, darn...I was looking forward to next chapter at the end of the chapter and it wasn't there. I can't say I'm sorry to say good-bye to Lucius...he was a real beast. But I would really like to say adios to Voldemort. Talk about evil. Poor Severus, that was one terrible beating.

Carry on, Ms Figg, you are an incredible teller of tales.
person Evelynn
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Severus is alive! Can't wait for the next update! Joyfulness!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant!!! Whew! Ol' Snape sure kicked some Malfoy ass!!! Poor thing! Being violently punished for standing up for his woman. How bloody romantic! Hermione better not back down now- she owes him! It's not every guy that'll slay your enemies for you! He's a real keeper! I totally love Severus' reason for surviving! Horny git!!! Happy writing and please update soon! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :}
person chatty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
phew!!! that was damn close. But hermione is really brave. Lucius really deserved his cock kicked. He needs castration for that matter. lol. That scene in the main hall was very touching. I loved it. It was very realistic. I hope you make this story as long as possible. lol. It is tooo good. :)
person Pam
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's our Sev...LOL Another great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Pam
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Sev and Hermione, I love that Sev took care of Luc. Great posting, please post again soon. Thanks.
person K
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh i love a violent mad sevvie, going right to the next chappie. YAY!!
person ccrawley
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, glad he is back and they are heating up. Looking forward to the lemons and rest of the story.
person Miepje
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Priceless! Good reason to stay alive, I'd say. lol

Oh, and kudos for Hermione telling Ron off... ^^

I hope you update soon!
person Edania
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats my man! Yeah go bby no can break him, and he still got to fuck herm, , yet i wonder what will happen after that? will they stay together or will he just fuck and leave? Update now!

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