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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF?
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, But wouldn't harry have informed Draco before leaving to go to ireland with seamus. I mean he just found out he's pregnant and he just pops off to see a healer about the pregnancy with someone other than the father. It would make more sense if all three went together.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how wonderful! Draco was all worried and then jealous. Oh he was mad! Glad Harry was able to get him to listen.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, this is awful.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is English your first language? There are quite a few grammar and editing mistakes that take away from the fluffiness of your story. I recommend finding a beta to help you with the rough edges.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was cute
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good, although the pace of it was just a little too fast, I think that you could have drawn it out more, but I liked it.
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