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Bravo! That was fantastic.. and yes.. it is a common fantasy. Very hot when only a fantasy.

V. v. nice....I wouldn't mind a bit of role play meself (as long as it IS play) I was a bit hesitant when I read it was sgstd. rape but so glad when they turned out to be trying out fantasies...that way I couldn't feel bad about liking it, lol. Now you have to have them trying out something else...hermione as harem girl, perhaps? ;) nice one.

The dialogue of the characters were clearly out of character, the story far too short and stilted for any sense of depth or personalisation, yet despite not liking the story, I have to say that as a writer you do have potential. I like your style, it's just not particularly suited to a Hermione/Snape fic. With closer study of the nature of the characters, I think you could create a fantastic story, one shot or longer. I hope you persevere and take this as constructive crit, not a flame.

Cool. I really enjoyed it.

Great one shot! I love stories like this where the two play out fantacies! Awesome story!

Tiffany

WOW, you are an amazing writer.