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for Pathetic

by BakaAlchemist

person Raie
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nothing that I can say besides.... WOW! :)
person NightShade
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I hope you are going to save them in some way in sequel... but even if not, I like it much. I am so sad and happy for them... this is a masterpiece!
person adi
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ouch - that one hurt. somehow, it felt so very real and so very heartbreaking, but I can see these two dying in quiet dignaty as you wrote
person DrowningPhoenix
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.
person Talin
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sad...
sad and dark, but wonderfully written. Kudos.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wibbles* Oh, that was so sad and sweet and Damn all them to hell for doing that to Harry and Severus.

cdk
person Sophia
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad and wonderful. I could almost picture that happening in the 7th book. I wonder if a sequel is possible or something, seeing as how the ending could be added on to, lol. Keep up the good work with all of your other stories.

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