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oh wow. update soon

wow, you are an excellent writer, i've always admired people who could properly portray the darker themes, good job an i eagerly await the next installment

Interesting fic. Please, continue writing.

Don't know if you're working on it but Chapters 1 and 2 are the same thing.

Oh...I like this...ALOT! Well done! Keep up the good work and please update again soon =)

woah O.O
this is....woah
IN A GOOD WAY
I like it
Im curious to see moreeee
<3

Facinating. I do hope you update soon. I love your portrayal of Harry-it seems very realistic giving the situation, though I admit the beginning between Lucius-Severus confused me.

ahh... i love your story but you havent up-dated in ages! i think i can go with Malfoy and Snape not being nice as long as they are not abusive! if harry grows up knowing that he belongs to them and they have him trained to be the perfect little pet... more power to them! oh and think of all the school fanticys that they could play out... will they train him in magic as well as... other things? hope so... humm... it would be really funny if when harry goes to school Snape gives him detention and then has harry give him some head under his desk and then one of the other teachers came in and had a conversation with Snape not knowing what harry was doing! lol... any who up-dates soon please!

I like this story very much already. pam

hey liked this!!! the only problem i had was how you started your sentences all with the same words...... that and you need to make your paragraphs longer.... oh please dont take any of that the wrong way. im only trying to help and i wish for you to update real soon.
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