schedule
May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hon....
Good story! I think I found two errors *grin* 1st - \"Demanding little piece of mean I got today.\" <-> \'meat I got today\' ? And the 2nd - \"I\'m sure she did. But I suppose we could check it out on out way back.\" <-> \'Our way back\' ?
Did I do good?
*hugs*
Good story! I think I found two errors *grin* 1st - \"Demanding little piece of mean I got today.\" <-> \'meat I got today\' ? And the 2nd - \"I\'m sure she did. But I suppose we could check it out on out way back.\" <-> \'Our way back\' ?
Did I do good?
*hugs*
schedule
April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fun fic :-) hope you continue!
schedule
April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was blisteringly erotic...
schedule
April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how they talk; it sounds like a bad parody of Victorian england... it just makes me giggle. And it\'s hot, too. ^_^ Write on! ^^
_/\\ \"-\" /\\_ SG
_/\\ \"-\" /\\_ SG