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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u spelled veela wrong its veela not vela....but the story is really good.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you're finally continuing this! Great start, Im eager to read more!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was Great! I hope that you update soon.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ...aww he is soo sweet .... but he should not beat him self up for what happen in the past ... i hope he can sell his book ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... late for now
angel
angel
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it starts out with him small thats cute. hhe can't wait till your next update.
Axel
Axel
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this version too!!! Are you going to contiue it?
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome , i like your story
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading both this and "A New Hope". I am intrigued by both perspectives and am looking forward to the direction you may take this in. Hopefully you will be able to continue this soon.