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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, am really glad that you have not stopped writing this story as it has developed into a story with substance. You are more than welcomed for the earlier review but honestly, I only call them the way I see them and your story has real merit.
That being said, you have now added to the complexity of your story by adding Lucius' poorly disguised facination with Hermione. Strange. Add to that the possibility of another elder Malfoy lurking about and you have a disturbing mix. I love it!!! Looking forward to your next update.
That being said, you have now added to the complexity of your story by adding Lucius' poorly disguised facination with Hermione. Strange. Add to that the possibility of another elder Malfoy lurking about and you have a disturbing mix. I love it!!! Looking forward to your next update.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't get to tell you when I passed this back to you, but Great Chapter! You are developing it quite nicely, and I am eager to beta the next!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finally found the site. I am new to the computer system. Just the past year or so. I love the story on the fanfiction.net site and I love it even more here also. You are a great writer and I would like to encourage you to continue with your writing. I love the way you have both of them opening up with each other. I love the alter side of Snape. I am still on pins and needles to see who is the mysterious robed wizard. Thanks for the terrific read.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for not leaving a review recently but you know how things get crazy in September. I am enjoying this story so much. I did a bit of a re-read tonight and your writing has improved immeasurably; however, this is secondary to the complexity your plot is now showing. You are doing an awesome job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for reading my story. :) Anywho, brilliant chapter, can't wait to read more! :D:D
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for the chapter, looking forward to the next :)
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I can't wait for the next chapters, please hurry writing them:-))
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its about bloody time you posted women....i was starting to wonder if you gave up or not..we need more interaction with Hermione and Severous....so who could it be???? dont you dare leave me hanging..post more soon please..great story..
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read the 13 chapters. My lord --- you need to keep writing this story!!!! You're doing a great job with the plot weaving -- not too much lemon, and just enough to keep us satisfied. Great job!