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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your first chapter is extremely well paced with good character development of the Grangers, tension between Snape & Hermione and interesting cliffie.
Please continue!
Please continue!
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how nice!?! A short tripp with your potions master! What could be better? And in the wilderness no less, it get
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... very nice! I eagerly await your next update!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like it a lot: do keep going. And where are we?
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I really love the story line so far. It looks like this is going to be an awsome fan fic. Please write more soon.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No way! I can't believe it ended there!! Hopefully you'll update soon. I can hardly stand it!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, it's not too cliche or horrible. What's going on with Dumbledore? I'd like to see more - SOON :)
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I can't wait to read more. Update again and soon.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful & your right men are pigs; some are just more bearable than others, lol. There is only one area in which I think you may have gotten her charter wrong but that
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot so far, very good representation of how Hermione would be out of school. I hope you update soon.