rate_review Reviews

Spelling and grammar aren't perfect, but they're also not the main part of the story. So with that being said, I absolutely love it and can't wait for more. I like HPSS fics, they were my first slash fiction I ever read. It took a little while longer for me to warm up to HPLM fics, but once I did I loved them. I now write both. However, I absolutely love the thought of putting them together. And I think you're doing a great job at it. I like the detail you went into when Harry was in his coma. And I was a bit surprised they weren't there when he woke up. Surely they have their own questions as to why they were suddenly, and painfully if I remember correctly as to what Dumbledore said, pulled to Hogwarts' infirmary and then further to Harry's side. And then to see each other there... Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! ~dpa06~

I love pairs Harry/Severus/Lucius
" / " /Remus
" / " /Draco
Harry/Lucius/Draco.

Your story is great but the first chapter is really short.
Update soon.

WOW LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Don't be so hard on yourself. I like the angle you are taking on this particular story plot. Please do continue. I like Draco/Harry situations for a suggestion as to one of the soulmates. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

interesting

Promising start, but I need a bit more substance for me to really sink my teeth into it to give it what I hope is a well deserved good review. I did rate it, a 2 for now, at least, until you give it more grit.

Anyways, I like the beginning. Real promising.