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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what Draco's got planned! EM
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story was good, but the grammar wasn't. I'm not trying to be mean, but grammar that bad makes a story hard to read. Also, I think you jumped into the sex a little too quickly. Harry went from scared that he hadn't disguised well enough to fucking him? There was never even anything mentioned beforehand about Harry liking Draco. I could Harry teasing him sexually and making him beg. If you don't have a beta you should get one.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful! Must have more!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story it is a funny twist from the normal Harry?Draco fic. Keep it up and if you ever need help ask.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Getting better and better! Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
//LoveGD
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent keep up the good work
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OM! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! the story is great^^
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I love this.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I quite like the idea of the Gemini Twin stuff though I'd like some more explanation about what they are. I suppose it will come out more as the bonding process takes place. Definite potential. :-D