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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god it great please continue
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you feel like throwing up after reading this story, where Harry takes advantage of Draco, go here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3056301/1/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3056301/1/
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, I can't wait till your next update.
PLEASE LET IT BE SOON.^_^
PLEASE LET IT BE SOON.^_^
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm liking the story!
To be quite honest I was a little squicked when i read about Harry's crush on Ron, but the story is written really well and I can't wait to read the next chapter of it.
To be quite honest I was a little squicked when i read about Harry's crush on Ron, but the story is written really well and I can't wait to read the next chapter of it.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon; I absolutely love your story. Eh, I need to work on my story...Lol.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm currently reading your story, and I must say that when I read this chapter (the fifth), that you made Ginny talk with hermione and Luna, because in the second or third chapter you've written that Ginny died in Harry's arms. I think that you forgot that ...
I like this story and am curious about what come next, so I'll read the next chapter right away. see you soon
I like this story and am curious about what come next, so I'll read the next chapter right away. see you soon
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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I love your story, and it's getting great! Please update, like...now!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grammar, shrammar! (Eiri, that's not a real word -_-') My first language isn't even recognised so nevermind it. Love the idea! Gosh, it's depressing though and I do hope things pick up and Harry gets some sense knocked into him. Always rather saw him as a emotionally stronger person but this is interesting too. Have hope harry! (and a bit of sense-who in blazes turns down the Slytherin Sex God? LOL-ahem)
Anyway, I about the grammar, just get a Beta-reader? There's an error you make about the 'to' and 'too'. Try listening to how it would sound like when you say 'I'm going to the movies'; notice that it sounds short? And when your friend says 'I want to go too' notice that he'll make it sound a tad longer? Hehe, well, it's not important (to me) but it is a consistent error. Just keep an eye open yea?
Love the story! Don't give up writing this pretty please (that's even more depressing)
~Eiri.
Anyway, I about the grammar, just get a Beta-reader? There's an error you make about the 'to' and 'too'. Try listening to how it would sound like when you say 'I'm going to the movies'; notice that it sounds short? And when your friend says 'I want to go too' notice that he'll make it sound a tad longer? Hehe, well, it's not important (to me) but it is a consistent error. Just keep an eye open yea?
Love the story! Don't give up writing this pretty please (that's even more depressing)
~Eiri.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story.
update soon
cause i need more.
update soon
cause i need more.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping to see more of this story soon.
Lily of Darkness
Lily of Darkness