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for Lessons

by ZooArmy

person emma
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great job with the chapter! (again) :]]
and good luck with chapter 9
xoxoxo
person sbkar
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here's the Dictionary of Slang (from the U.K.) [http://www.dictionaryofslang.co.uk/] and Maledicta [http://www.sonic.net/maledicta/]. I hope this adds to your story in some way.
person Millis
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I think this story's just great, but it's actually a little annoying when your answers to the reviews take up more space than the story itself. It's like "OH YES! A whole long wonderful excellent chappie! *big smile*" But then.."NOOO!! Damn those reviews..*grr*"

Ehh.. Do you get me or do you just think I'm mental?

Hugs
person steffi
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi^^

so, da du ja deutsche bist muss ich das schon mal ned af englisch schreibn*g*
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person Fia
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pansy rules !!!
person Kiwi
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you can forget my earlier review... this chapter was much better. It flowed nicely and it wasn't confusing. =)
Great work, keep it up! ^_^
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope we get the meeting in the next chapter and I think that the girls will love eachother. ;-)
person amanda
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really to the enth degree love this story it is just so perfect i must say just the right amount of angst and lovelyness i can't wait for more
amanda
person emma
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
greatgreatgreat! keep updating :)
person Leenah
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read you story "Lessons" and I loved it. I couldn't spare a moment between the chaps which is why my first review is at chap 6. cause it ends :'( Hopefully you will update soon. This story is just too good to wait for :) The plot is brilliant, as is your english and I'm looking very much forward to some action in next chap ;) keep up the good work.
Love Leenah

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