rate_review Reviews

If Rowling wrote hot erotic H/Hr, what would it look like? I would say you are damn close with a few tiny word changes. Great one-shot!

I wasn't going to review but Ichecked your profile and this was the only story I saw so I thought I would let you know you did a good job.

I really like it. But, I think you should not use such rude words like "cunt" in the description of the events. This way it looks to cheap. Like a really cheap porn-movie and that is not so overly erotic. If you use it in the dialog, it's okay, but not in the description.

BUT: Keep up the H/HR stories. There are way to few of them here.

This was really good.
I'd like to read other stories done by you that are H/Hr or even Dr/Hr

;-) HHR writers are realy without doubt the most talented in writing gab among all shippers in teh fandom. They can take any scene from the canon and make it a reality on its own. More convincing and entertaining than canon itself. An enigma indeed. ;-)

And this is probably the entertainingly smuttest ;-)outtake of that scene from the canon. Its terribly, annoyingly wonderful! ;-) Care to make aother outake from antoher canon scene, eh? ;-)

For a story without a huge plot that was really really hot. You made the sex real...Hermione not getting off the first time. Having Harry be that attentive with her to try again was wonderful. :O)