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for Dizzy In The Heat

by DivineAngel

person Mena
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really lovely so far and your writing is excellent! It feels like a novel. Well done so far, please do update soon! I love Hermione/remus but so few people seem to write them and only a handful who write them well. This story is definitely on my "one to watch" list:) Keep it up!
person mya croft
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story can't wait to read more

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mya
person Jill
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and addictive! Please keep going.
person pinkwands
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh remus you darling, I just adore him :D I hope you will update soon your story has ooodles of potential :)
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, i really like it. Its so sweet she should get rid of Ron, real soon.
person The Random Meep
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice please do continue. ^__^
person lemonade
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this!! Please give some more!
person lisa
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron but ohh well I love Remus and he deserves some happiness from all the sadness around him. I love it keep up the good work. and I cannot wait til you update.
person Robin
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I'm not a good cook, but I think I have the right recipe for a tasty review somewhere:)
Let's see:
1. Very realistic (I know that sort of searching for words - ugh)
2. Nice, very defined characters
3. Vegetables fresh from the garden, grown with a lot of TLC(Maybe a lot of TLC for Hermione - ok she's not a real vegetable)
4. and to round it up - simply add a nice, genuine plea for posting a new chapter (or two) soon

:) don't take me tooooo seriously - I hope you like that recipe
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! This is wonderful so far . . . you're doing a great job of building the tension up between Hermione and Remus, making it all so believable! Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~

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