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for A Little Unbroken

by roxierose13

person erotic*chaos
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good! that last bit was great, i loved it!
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! This one was awesome too! Soooo funny! Good job!
person Cris
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First, to think that you were flamed for either this or the first one is crazy. Ignore them like they ignore your warnings and author's notes. As for any 'self insertion', I can't say anything because I don't know you personally, but I trust when you say that it's not.

Now, on to my actual review. With the first one, when I saw that it was Tom/Dan I didn't think I'd like it because I don't really read any fics with real people, but I read some of your other stories so I thought I'd read it. I'm glad I did because I loved it, both of them. The girl sounds like it could be me. No joke. And I love how I could actually see this playing out in my mind. Very good job. I hope there's more to come..?
person Gauloise
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My, my, that was good! As great as ever, but I loved the humor at the end of the fic. Don
person Katie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I liked this one better than the first. but maybe that's just because it was smuttier. :)
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha poor dan
person Lee
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Another fantastic one-shot/sequel and I loved it just as I've loved all of your stories. Anyhow, Great work again and I shall be waiting for more~!
person stephamie
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like you should rite a continue i would really like to no wat happends next so ya you should rite a continue.
person L_C
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I quite like this fic and the first one, the only thing that bugs me a wee bit is the way you use their names a bit too much, im sure some of the times its not always needed...

Hope a 3rd entry will be written!

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