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ahah. this is too good. can't wait for you next installment. should be interesting! ;)

This looks to be a real cute story. Email me with updates, please! :D Oh, and you transposed "gentleman" with "gentelman" in this chapter, or maybe the previous one. I can't remember now. Other than that, great premise and followthrough, so far.

Well, this was interesting. It was pretty well-written (just a few grammar mistakes, but I'm not so knit-picky as to mention that here). You've intirgued me. Seriously. Though I must tell you that your chapters are unbearably short. I get to the end of each one and I'm like, "where's the rest?" And also, are you planning on writing every other chapter as a reflection of the other--simply told from another POV? I say that because it gets a bit tedious to read, and I've never seen anyone pull it off well enough to make me actually want to finish reading. I'm not insinuating anything; just saying.

Anyway, like I said before, I'm intrigued. Update soon.

Truth

How intriging!! I guess something happen between them. i like the story looks very interesting and you write very good. Do not leave us waiting to long. UPDATE!!

Nice, really nice hon! Surprised me again, on what Draco did in the war. Now I wonder if these two will get together or not....lots of arguements are coming down the pipe, I can see it now. lol ;) Um... what happens after Draco saves Harry? sorry but you got me wondering now. ;) so a excellent job on your second chapter!

Elbe.

Please continue...a pleasant start
can't wait for more...

This is really good. For a moment I thought you had taken us back in time once Hermione said those words. But you proved me wrong. wonderful job, I can not wait to read more of this!

Elbe.

Looks good so far! Can't wait to read the next chapters.

fabulous :) keep going.

Wonderful so far. I look forward to the next chapter :)