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for Why those eyes?

by ZooArmy

person Youngauthor
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was very pretty... prosaic. I'd love to read more though... please : ).
person gryffindorgrl86
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting.....i never read a fic in that format. almost poetic and well written
person Jien
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*nods* it is quite interesting, you should continue
person Laura
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...interesting. To be honest, I'm not to fond of the format. But it would be interesting to see where it would lead if you continued.
person Lady X
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was so so magnificently sad and beautiful. I loved it...I would like to see it expanded...just not in this form..you know? Like this was just a prologgy thing and then it switches to normal 3rd person or back and forth first person with actual story not stream of thoughts. you know what I mean?...but it was so beautifully complete the way it is...I'm not sure if i truly want it to continue you know?
person bgblackrose
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story and think that you should continue

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