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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Cry* Why'd you stop?!?!?! CONTINUE! Please!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so glad you posted so soon! Keep the muse going!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good writing and an excellent beginning. Please keep on it. I love D/B/Hr
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story. I can
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, why can't Draco just stick to the Slytherin sluts before he realizes what he wants? Lune, too? Okay, for that, just grant me one request...do NOT make Hermione a virgin. I'm all for equality, you know ;)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this but... Hermione isn't a "muggle". I don't usually review for little quirks like this but I kept finding myself yelling in my head while I was reading "HERMIONE ISN'T A MUGGLE". Muggles are non-magic people. Herminone is a witch. Her parents were muggles. God I feel like a huge geek for even taking the time to type this but I guess since I read the fan fic in the first place I should just own up to my own geekdom.
Anyway, I do like the story and I hope you keep it up. I remember you saying in the beginning how you didn't like that Hermione always gives in so easily in these stories. I kinda like it. Not becuase I think that it's in-character for Hermione to be easy (it's not of course). It's just that I've come across soooo few Draco!Veela/Hermione!Mate stories that actually get finished so I appreciate that we get the fun smut in before the author goes AWOL. With the slow build-up, the stories usually get abandoned and you never get to see the climax, so to speak.
What I'm trying to say here is- please take however long you like in getting there- just get there :) To many of the good ones go away before their done.
Anyway, I do like the story and I hope you keep it up. I remember you saying in the beginning how you didn't like that Hermione always gives in so easily in these stories. I kinda like it. Not becuase I think that it's in-character for Hermione to be easy (it's not of course). It's just that I've come across soooo few Draco!Veela/Hermione!Mate stories that actually get finished so I appreciate that we get the fun smut in before the author goes AWOL. With the slow build-up, the stories usually get abandoned and you never get to see the climax, so to speak.
What I'm trying to say here is- please take however long you like in getting there- just get there :) To many of the good ones go away before their done.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. It's well written and I like how you're taking your time with the development of the story and characters. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
~Diana
~Diana
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There just aren't enough Veela fics out there, and certainly not with Blaise AND Draco!! This fic of yours is very intriguing. I like Draco's resistance, but I wonder how he and Bliase are going to resolve this. You have a good thing going here, and I look forward to your next installment!
-Avari
-Avari