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Sorry, I've tried to stick it out but it's still too confusing and I'm no clearer on who everyone is,what the goal or plot of this is. I don't think I'll be reading anymore. Good luck with it.

well i must say both this nad what did i do are good stories however i am still a little lost on what happend. Last thing i knew draco was being killed and fred and george was rounding up people in there house. Well there ever be a part that will tell the readers what happend?

I can't review because I'm too confused. Please start clearing some things up. Where is Draco? Is it Gryffindors who are torturing him in the prologue or Lucius? I thought in chapter 2 that it was Voldemort who killed Lucius. What did I do? ended with Harry and Draco together but this starts with Draco being tortured. Again I say I am so confused.

That was short, and didn't really explain anything..but i will still read it faithfully, update

Harry's owl is named Hedwig not headwig... and it's are you deaf not def....this seems like it's flipping around quite a bit..for no apparent reason. Where the hell is Draco? Who was it that got beat up in the first chapter? Confusing, a little, your story is.

stillll confused!!!!im sorry but i honestly am trying to understand, but i guess i shall have to wait! keep going

im kinda confused, but i get the feeling i will start to understand as the story goes on. update please.

I have NEVER left a negative feedback before. However, this story is VERY confusing. I enjoyed the first part "What must I do." To you it was "off track" but it was consistant and concise.

I won't abandon your fic. I only hope that you will clean it up and realize that you are bouncing all over the place -- without connection. I didn't realize until the 5th chapter that they were on summer holidays.

You are a talented author, but you need to figure out what you are going to do with this story FROM THE BEGINNING of it and go forward from there.

Good Luck -- and yes, I will keep reading with the hope that I will be able to figure it out.

--RD Wind

Hey! I don't know when you started this, but i just got into your stories recently, i've read scars, awesome stories, and i also like this one alot too! i hope you continue on with it, i find it extremely interesting!!
Please, update!!