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by IncessantDarkness29

person Demon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hot, and I personally feel that it just got a whole lot more hotter, thank you for the wonderful update and I look forward to more chapters in this fantastic story.

Mwah
Demon
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic.
person Elric Maxwell
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've finally saw this update and had to run to it!! ^_^ That was THE hottest chapter yet! Man, all the tension you built was worth it!!! I can't wait for more!!! EM
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Post! I love this story and would like to read more. It's very good!
person PrettySin
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute fic, and I'm liking the characterizations- the reluctance, and the attraction. Very sexy, and I find it well worth the wait. I wonder what the gentlemen are thinking after that lovely little interlude. ;-)

prettysin86@gmail.com, if you'd please e-mail me when you update. Thank you!
person Lee
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you for the update! May you have a great December and Christmas, with lots of relaxing and free time for writing!

Cheers, Lee
person Medatsu
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't found a good enough story to review in a long time. Thanks for the great story. Hope you find the time and strength to continue. You mentioned mistakes and lack of good editing. If you'd like i would beta for you. Just an offer but a sincere one.

Hope to see more from you.
Medatsu
person Hazy
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love This Story you must right more i want to see what happens so badly!!!!!
person roxierose13
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* I am insulted! (not really). YOu only review mine when I review yours? Is that the new deal no one told me about? Well, I have been reading your fic at the very least, but I want it to hurry up! Even I dont hold out 12 chapters before I give smut (and I really am that evil too). You've read my stuff, you know. I'm waitng for the real fun to begin. Enough expo! I want hot, slutty, sweaty, smut! gimme! *whine* pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. I need something to distract me from finals that are about to begin. *starts to panic* i cant do it! I'm not smart enough! I'm gonna fail out of college! *somebody slaps across the face* okay, I'm better... until friday when the real fun begins (and by fun I mean pure and utter torture).

What was I talking about? oh, the fic, right. i knew that. um... *brain dies* its hot but need more action. good characterizations though i can see where this is headed (dom!Harry)... you know my preferences.

And yeah, I've kind of stopped reviewing in general. not sure why. I feel bad but sometimes I just cant bring myself to click the button. Also, maybe it's the underlying annoyance that if I review everytime ppl know that i don't do anything with my time except read fics. hence why the panic about school has begun. Okay, so thats not completely true since i havent written anything in like 3 months, but still. gha school. i hate it! dont go to college (and im sorry if you're already in it). it sucks.
person Jeni
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*regains composure, wipes sweat off face and releasing breath i didn't know i was holding*

HOLY.CRAP.

I love your detail! I was so lost in that chapter......amazing. really amazing. I...wow.

And I did not abandon you! (obviously) I knew you would update sooner or later!!!! :D YAY! Come to think of it, I DID comment this story before right?...I've been here since like chapter four or something...

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