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by IncessantDarkness29

person S.A
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter! i thought this was a fic that wouldn't be finished but i kept checking just in case, im so glad you're not gonna abandon this!

oh and i love the way you write, the detail that you out into their relationship and their thoughts are what make this fic interesting for me. can't wait for the next chapter ;)
person GML
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Draco hasn't even come close to realising just why he's so obsessed with Harry. *shakes head* *smirk* Things should start picking up from here. *grin* Great chap! More Please! ASAP!
person Echo
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Another one where Draco and Harry seem determined to take up residence on the banks of DENIAL. ;p Your explanation for the changing couch was fine but I have another theory. You can change to couch into a bed but maybe it take energy to keep it from reverting back to a couch. Please update soon.
person anon
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
verrry, verrry goood! update soon! ^_^
person roxierose13
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't ditch you? Honey, I wouldn't ditch you like people do me. This too good fic to ditch! Action or no :) Draco must be feelings something, right? He can't be completely cold. You've managed to keep them IC very well! I love an IC Draco... he's so very evil, hehehe.

I really wish we could respond to reviews on this site, but it's not possible. So! I hope you will not be upset if I take a tiny bit of time and talk about your review on ABA. You mentioned Pansy being his confidant. Yes, she is, though Blaise will definitely have a role to play. Draco doesn't necessarily have to worry about things getting back to Harry. He is a Slytherin after all ;) I know the chapters are short too, but they're all at least 6 pages long, all depends on how much dialogue is in them. (well, almost all are 6. I know that chapter 26 is only 4 pages, but the content more than makes up for it ;)) Did I mention this fic was really long? lol.

How long is this fic going to be? ':) I do hope there's more HD interaction soon. Would love some kind of tension breaker or maybe the tension explodes... oooh.... you give me such evil ideas. It's really not a good thing, 'cause then I want to write, lol. and I really should be writing my paper instead, lol. Stop making me want to write ff! lol ;) update soon! :)
person tas
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just reading chapter 8 and liked it so far. I like fics that build up to the moment. Yours definitely does that. I would definitely like to read more. If you can email me with the updates, that would be great.
~tas
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, you keep your readers wanting more. I liked this chapter, but I must say I was exspecting a little more. However, I am aware that this transitional chapter was needed so I will not complain. This story seems to be heating up slowly (which I like) so I hope you update as soon a you can!

Once again, thank you for the update e-mail! Please update soon.
person In2Deep
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA! harry got the bed! lol... humms... i liked this chapter but there is so much tension! hope that draco pulls his head out of his ares soon! but yea up-dates soon please!
person Alison
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry took the bed! Perfect! What did Harry do when he left dinner? Do we get to find out?

Please update soon!
=o)
person Lioncourt
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMmmmm.... all this power-talk sounds promising!

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