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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for the reviews. I agree with "Water" that it was rushed at the end. I was starting to feel that 25 chapters was getting a bit long. I will take the comment to heart and not worry so much about length. My stories tend to be long so I can develop more complete characters and concepts. I think I'll stick with what I'd really prefer to write and not try to truncate to stay in a certain length. Thanks again to all.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not the way I expected it to end, but I liked it none the less! *grins* You did good with the story. I enjoyed it greatly. Sequel in mind?? ::MV::
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your concept and style, but in the end, it got a bit rushed.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story ^_^
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic, write more.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Normally, I'm not into this kind of fic, but you have me interested. I read all 17 chapters at one go and I am very eager to read more. Please update when you can!!!! ::MV::
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I can't wait to see where you take this in the future. Thanks for an orginal story
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
welcome to the neighborhood love :) I like the empath theme here... and my lovely Lucius mmmmmm. When I read he needed to have more children I practically screamed I'll have your babies!!!!... keep up the good work :)