schedule
August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I like it a lot because most of their reactions are believable.
schedule
August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm totally in love with this! I hope you continue and update soon!
schedule
August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a lovely story. I hope you do update again soon.
schedule
August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished your story and enjoyed it quite a bit! Both characters didn't stay 'in character' thru the whole thing but I found that I really didn't care all that much! I like the way you've written both characters and the storyline is just getting interesting! And of course, did enjoy the smut quite a bit! Never enough smut in most stories but yours is just right! :D Thanks and keep writing!
schedule
August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a very neat take on the Marriage Law idea! i hope to see you update again soon; this is getting very interesting!
schedule
August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should continue it. Its sort of a down moment. Its saddening. Its very depressing to see couples like that, especially 'that' couple.
Well, that is part of a marriage. They should kiss and make up soon!
Well, that is part of a marriage. They should kiss and make up soon!
schedule
August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule
August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as you can,, you really left the story at a crappy moment i'm dying to know what will happen.
schedule
August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story; can