rate_review Reviews

Well, like I said before, I LOVE this story!! Honest! It is magnificently written!! So full of... everything... :) Does that make sense? No, probably not, but hey, you know me... :)
Well I don't really know what to say next, so... I'm gonna read this WONDERFUL story once again (I lost the count... :p)

Hugies
K

PS: I rated it!! :p

I've read youre story allready a couple of days ago, but I didnt had internet afterwards so I couldn't write a review.. Now I read it again, and again it gained me completely... Every sentence seduces you with a gentle force to read the next one and when youre done you read them again.
I really love how you just choose one thing to say, and draw with those single words a picture of feelings and thoughts which are impossible to pronounce exactly; therefore it is as much a poem as a story you wrote
Please write more :)
bye

My own computer being incapable of accessing the internet for the moment I'm taking the (rather big) risk of using my father's for the moment o-0'
Therefore I will only be able to read and review this story...
What a shame, I know (I was thinking something Lucius/Sirius so I really want to read the story previous or below this one- depends on your point of view)
But I really enjoyed this one...
It's quite unique (I think) to have a submissive Lucius...
especialy when the other party is Severus :)
And I just love the idea of Draco taking over his father's lead
(again from a certain point of view because you cannot really call this leading...)

I'm dying to read the rest (speaking, just speaking... I do not intend to really die
or is it to die really? You know what I wanted to say don't you...
Of course you do)
Till I see-read you again,
Hugs Lhune

This is very...what's the word?.... well, almost poetic. I like the way you phrase things. I think the word I'm looking for is ardent. You have definitely captured my attention.

I really like this, the style, how it ends the same way it started. :D You have talent.