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Very interesting! How is Harry going to figure into this?

Oh, your good, very good. Had me hooked from the summary. And I'm still hooked. And egages, everything makes perfect since! Yes, I never thought that in one chapter someone could actually make Sirius/Severus plausible, but very much looked forward to. Now, if only we get to see what Harry has to do with all this....



Seraphwalker

Sorry, me again, I just took a look at some of the reviews, and I have to say; as good as I am in English, I never noticed any spelling errors, nor do I feel the need to go back and look. I don't know if this is your first story but, no ones perfect, and everyone's got MORE than a few writing flaws. Anyone who just waste their time looking for errors in a story isn't someone who enjoys reading for its ownsake. And yeah, there are probably twenty errors in this reiew, but you know what? I. DON'T. CARE. They can all suck cheesewhiz for all I care. So just write another chapter already...I'm dying to know whats next. (whine)




Seraphwalker

THIS IS SOOO GOOD! I love it, I like Siruis's new look. *puppy dog eyes* Imagines snape cuddeling with little black puppy. You can tell he wants the man he should just shagg him like a bunny already.KEEP GOING!

Excellent story so far! There were some spelling errors that were distracting, but otherwise I really enjoyed this.

This sounds really really good, but, your spelling is atrocious! really... I suggest getting a spell-checker on your computer and running it, failing that, find a beta!

There were so many spelling errors that I gave up and stoped reading.