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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well..I've seen situations like this, and Hiaro could be top until Ron gets the hang of it, kind of a teaching thing between lovers.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! plz update as soon as u can. you are a wonderful writer!!. i wish i could write as good as u
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 30! Maybe Ron should be submissive the first time and after that the dominant.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 29!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I was reading your story, when I noticed that you used German in chapter 13. I guess you used a translation machine because the translation is word for word. I am German and let me tell you that the ranslation wasn't good at all. But, I don't think that anybody will take notice because most people don't know German.
Im diesen Sinne mach weiter so!
mel
I was reading your story, when I noticed that you used German in chapter 13. I guess you used a translation machine because the translation is word for word. I am German and let me tell you that the ranslation wasn't good at all. But, I don't think that anybody will take notice because most people don't know German.
Im diesen Sinne mach weiter so!
mel
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love how you talked about everyone in this chapter. But I got to say that I don't like where Sirius and Severus is going, I really don't want neither to die, maybe get hurt but not die, please not die. I guess I am a romantics that be leaves that all happy ending means that every one deserves to be with the ones they love, not just the main characters. But I have to say that I really want to see Ron and Hiaro get together. Poor Ron, being laughed by his own friends for being so blind. He he^_^
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oi, you have GOT to finish this story!!!
lol i just can't wait for the end and you stopped it at a very crucial point.
just hope you'll update soon 'cauze it's such a great plot you made up.
love all the fae, archangel stuff and all (i'm a fan of angels and fairies in their proper beauty^^)
anyway wish you luke for the rest
deliciously
lol i just can't wait for the end and you stopped it at a very crucial point.
just hope you'll update soon 'cauze it's such a great plot you made up.
love all the fae, archangel stuff and all (i'm a fan of angels and fairies in their proper beauty^^)
anyway wish you luke for the rest
deliciously
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have got to have chapter 28! I've been reading this all day! Must have more!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shock, speechless, and crazy* UUUUUPPDAAAAAAAATTTEE!!!!!!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great.cant wait to see what happens.so much suspension.update soon