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for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person MysticF
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Minerva was really cool in this chapter, and Albus adopting that child, of course he would. This story is both very funny and very touching, and I love it.
person Cara
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! Damn if only my fav. Predator authors updated their stories this quickly. :/
About this chapter, this definetly adds a new twist to the story. Sorta disappointed that there was no Snape or Hermione, but I guess I'll have to wait for the next chappie.
Now I'm off to go read some of your other stories to keep me entertained. =D
-Cara
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Severus is going to be too pleased with Bara hopping about.
I have a feeling that Bara is going to get underfoot.
But then again Severus might take a liking to the kid. :)
person firewall
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - I really like the parallel thems running through the story...Dumbledore and Hermione's quests. Nicely done.
person angel
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope they dont fight him when he trys to get guardianship of him ... please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Sampdoria
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I get more and more intrigued by your story. I love the plot, and even though I usually don't like stories which are WIP, your regular and fast updates makes me look for this story each day!!! I look forward for the next chapters, keep up the wonderful work you are doing!!!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh! Still great, I love the completely original idea, too.

PS. Britain apologises for Simon off of American Idol.....
person firewall
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19 - By George, Angel, you got it! He is a Harper. Ms Figg another great chapter.
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup he's got the power!
person Cara
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes I read the makeover, great story btw.
That was positively wicked of Minerva lol. Breaking a swivel chair. =0
And I just can't picture a Dumbledore without a beard...even as a baby he prolly had it haha.

I loved your description of Snape playing the violin
'you play the violin?'
'no i play the drums. i just carry them in this case to throw everyone off.' XD
was delicious, the only way I can put it. Violin players always do look passionate when they're playing, as if they're having a viogasm or something.
Keep up the great work!

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