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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastically good!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far... please continue. They are not the OOC. I could see this happening.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! This chapter could stand alone, but I do hope you continue. In any case, I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An excellent twist on a well used theme. I not only enjoyed the change of perspective, but your style too (although perhaps some of your paragraphs wee a touch too long).
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very beautifully written. I do hope you will continue with it.