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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, though you need to put in a disclaimer.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot, I'm looking forward to more!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. I can't wait to read more.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Done! this story is going to go somewhere verygood :) I am very impressed with the ploy bunny, as I don't think I have seen any others like this. So no obvious cliches YAY! :D
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Maybe next chapter you'll tell more about how Severus and Amy got together? Update soon!