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i cant seem to be albe to read you fic so i used a round about way to try and find it but i dont know this website

I like your story so far, it seems to have a good plot. Aside from some spelling mistakes, I think that it'll be a good story! Please keep updating! *gives marshmallows for potential flamers*

so, ya gonna update soon?

Wow, that was awesome beggining.
Love it, update soon please!

I am SOOO flattered! It seems to have potential, but I'll be honest as I expect honesty in reviews given to me and thus give it in my own reviews: You need a beta to edit. If you e-mail it to me, I can beta for you...I enjoy doing so and, considering it's dedicated to me, would be honored to beta this particular story. Also, I've found comparing a beta'd piece to an unbeta'd original copy can teach me a lot and I'm sure it would help improve your writing skills. Let me know! ~ FallenAngel, author of Revelations. Oh, and expect an update soon! Once I hit 280 reviews, I'll update!

this promisses...please continue :D

yei..I was the first one to review ...eheheh..anyway update as soon as possible