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for Practice Makes Perfect

by CiraArana

person Anon
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice you could make a sequel
person Kasey22
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! Great characterization, great plotline, great everything. Really well done.
person Janey
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! Please, please, please write some more of it!!!
person Malinda
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will this only be a one-shot, or are you going to make it into a longer story? I would LOVE to read some more chapters...please...I just felt as though the ending left me hanging a bit; I mean, are they together? Are they still 'just friends'? Please continue and let us know.
person morgan
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god i loved this story.
person RAW19
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what i'm talking about! i think this story was well done and i highly enjoyed it! 10 out of 10!
person Starcoffin
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.....M.....G...... This is one of the best ones I have read in a long time. Just how Hermione (if she wanted to snog Harry) would have acted. Keep writing
person TiffANY
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just adore this story!

It is BRILLIANT!

You have to continue and I can't wait to read more!
person mannequin
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this last night and it's so good I just had to come back and leave a review. Poor Ron! He can't see how amazing Hermione is, which is fine by me, more for Harry. I agree with another reviewer - I think you should make a follow up to what happened with their "lessons"
person jenny
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue this, please

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