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for Of Butterflies in a Hurricane

by roxierose13

person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 Trust Hermione to worry about not bringing an umbrella and it was silly of them not to since they could have expected bad weather. I always carry one! There are so many small portable ones out there and she could have always shrunk one of the bigger ones. Tsk tsk tsk.

I wonder when Hermione is going to hear from Ron that Harry was calling out Draco's name in his sleep. I can't imagine Ron would have kept it a secret from her. Hermione would figure out the truth; she seems smart that way. :D
person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8 Harry keeps telling himself that his friends won't understand. Frankly, it's getting annoying! They're obviously not foolish, spiteful little children and they've grown and learned a lot. He should just tell them and get it over with.
person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 By George, I think she's got it. Good for her! I love Hermione's character; I have since I read about her in the first book. :D
person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11 Well done. I hope nobody realizes how Zabini helped. But he was very cattivo. Molto bene!
person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12 I know you're up to chapter 27 but I wanted to address your worry about low reviews. I like this story but adultfanfiction has so many things it's tough for me to keep track. Maybe your readers are just off in other stories. Don't worry; they'll catch up. I also intend to keep reviewing.

I liked this chapter extremely. Harry thought he could do this alone. But he needs Hermione and Ron with him; together they form an invincible team. Does he really think he could have figured out a solution to the locket on his own? I hope he appreciates having them.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more!!
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 27!
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-pokes you so you'll update



~Ero
person bigkt
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I recognised ur name from another story and thought 'hang on, I'm sure there was another fic of urs I liked' so I had a look and here it is! I remember reading this a while back and then for some reason (im sure there was one) u stopped updating. I see some new chapters here but I haven't read them yet coz I want to start from the beginning again. please please please please please please keep writing this fic tho coz of what I remember I really liked it. I will review again once I've read it and let u no if I was right. (which I'm sure I am!) :D
person jetuke
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so COOL. I can't wait to find out what that mysterious memory is about. Please update soon. The waiting is going to be the end of me.

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