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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Aidan Eiram
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You stopped!! how could you just when everything was getting interesting. You really need to write more. Please!!!!!!
person Sophia
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely wonderful chapter; quite possibly my favorite so far. I love how Harry is really starting to fall for Severus and how Severus is honestly trying so hard to get Harry to like him. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the magnificent work!!!!!!
person Carol
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Going Great So far! please Update
person tamachan444
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! good plot, fluff, lime. and no annoying spelling mistakes or anything. i know you take great care to write theses. so thank you so much, i'm looking forward the next chapter
person prettydelial
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, as always. And yes, Harry is definitely a brat.
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to annoying, but with wizards living to over 150 years I think it would be odd that they could only reproduce safely when they are in their forties. While I am nitpicking, I also think that if the ministry were to make a law forcing marriage by forty, it might also stipulate the couple had to be m/f to ensure safe births.
person Draven Wolfe
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I like this chapter a lot. I hope that 'first kiss' is coming up soon...Heh.
person The Mandy
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very beautiful chapter. I could almost feel the warm rain.
person Lina
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! UPDATE MORE!!! NOW!!!!
person tamachan444
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude! you keep on updating but no new chapters apear! i love this story! please fix the glitch

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