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for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

by Mizzfreestyle

person Aroyo
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
juuuuust right...but could go longer (hehe!)
update soon! Cant wait to find out what happened!!
person Olivia
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Story.
Bad Formatting.
person Silent
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um... the symbols was a pain but this chapter was pretty good, i felt pretty bad for snape during the begining but its all good now... look forward to the next chapter
person Sydney
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter. Hope you update soon.
person charms92
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just watned to sya i am enjoying the story and was glad to see such a quick update--but what happened to the formatting?- chapter 2 is much harder to follow (not to mention read lol)--looking forward to more updates and reading more of your interesting story
person anne
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more story
person mnfm
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to long, not to short; just perfect! Please continue, I'll be waiting.
person Hambares
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry is in for some confusing times!
person The w00t Girl
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It'd be better if you'd edited this chapter, since there are different symbols mixed in with the words that shouldn't be there, like:
person The w00t Girl
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since, I didn't comment in the last review about the story, it's wonderful, the second chapter is the best!

Please continue this story.

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