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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would very much like to see you continue this. It's an interesting idea and one I think could be done up quite well. I'm not trying to be rude, but I would suggest finding a good beta. I know it helped me a great deal when I finally sucked it up and asked someone to look over my work. Keep up the good job and I look forward to more from you.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so good. I have read many other, Harry is forced to marry Severus. but this one is just so much better.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay what to say...how about this...DON'T you dare not to continue this story.
I think it's great and if all the other readers out there aren't too lazy you'll have many reviews very soon.
So I hope you're updating again very soon.
Thanks :-)
I think it's great and if all the other readers out there aren't too lazy you'll have many reviews very soon.
So I hope you're updating again very soon.
Thanks :-)
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's so funny. Please up-date sooe.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, absolutely love it ** can't wait for you to continue. Please, please,please continue.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was......interesting. I can't believe that Harry took it like that, actually, I can. I just hope he relizes that Severus cares for him soon. I can't wait for the update. This promises to be a very wonderful story.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is starting out to be a great story! You have the characters down really well, really believable. Keep up the good work.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Off to a nice start. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic....poor Harry! I do wonder what Snape was going to say to Harry though. Please keep writing, I'm hooked! Excellent.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this one's quite good! I can't wait to read more so hope you update soon! First chapter progressed a bit quickly but that wasn't to bad since the starting was original... I liked it a lot! :)