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by ifyouweremine

person JayDee
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! There's certainly clues to the ending there but I didn't twig even when someone linked me to it with "You'd totally enjoy this." Well, I did. Good job.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I kinda picked up on where it was heading partway through and yet it was still a shock. Poor, poor sad Draco.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it. I knew what was going on, but sometimes I hate it when I'm right. That was moderately depressing.
Your a really good writer though, so I'm going to go read more of you stories and try to repress that...
person melanie
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoah! that was a wierd ending. was so not expecting that. but it was good
person YamiBakura
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....O_o
person hechoenmexico
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah see, I thought that Harry was dead, but then I thought I was wrong cause it said that he opened his mouth...but I guess that was Draco's craziness. Well then. I am morbidly fascinated. Good job.
person timothyology
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that WAS creepy.
person s and s blah
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and thought I'd tell you how wonderful it was. I figured out the squick from like the 4 line. So it wasn't that much of a shocker. I still have to say that it was breath takingly beautiful. thanks
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok so yes I have already commented this but I stumbed on it again and re-read it and gah it is so disturbing on so many levels. You did a good job. I guess everyone else is just way brighter than me cuz i never would have guessed it. But just...yuk. I can't get the mentaal image out of my head and it is seriously starting to freak me out...just thought you should know. But that shows you did a good job I guess, so...good for you!
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
creepy

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