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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the best fanfic i have ever read. love it.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess I'm joining the party a little late, but I just though I'd drop a line to let you know that I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to the next installment.
There's some minor typos scattered throughout your chpaters. I hate to bring that up and not be able to point out the exact ones, but my eyes already sting from reading 43 chapters straight through (typos or no, you know how to keep a boy's attention XD), so I'm really in no place to go back through hunting for them at the moment. Just though I'd mention that they're there. They're not severe enough to really be a problem. Just thought I'd mention it in case you happen to be a grammar nazi like me.
But. Very interesting story. I hope to see more and more of Draco's wit as it progresses (I've noticed some of it shining through, and it makes me happy). Your moments of comedic relief have me giggling out loud.
Anyway. Long rambling review. Point is, I like it and I plan to keep reading.
There's some minor typos scattered throughout your chpaters. I hate to bring that up and not be able to point out the exact ones, but my eyes already sting from reading 43 chapters straight through (typos or no, you know how to keep a boy's attention XD), so I'm really in no place to go back through hunting for them at the moment. Just though I'd mention that they're there. They're not severe enough to really be a problem. Just thought I'd mention it in case you happen to be a grammar nazi like me.
But. Very interesting story. I hope to see more and more of Draco's wit as it progresses (I've noticed some of it shining through, and it makes me happy). Your moments of comedic relief have me giggling out loud.
Anyway. Long rambling review. Point is, I like it and I plan to keep reading.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 43) WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!! Understated but very hot at the same time.
*swoooooon*
YEAH!!!! Draco on top has NO BLOODY PROBLEM pulling the strings!!! ALL OF THEM!!!!
*dies*
He's having SO much fun!!!
XD
*swoooooon*
YEAH!!!! Draco on top has NO BLOODY PROBLEM pulling the strings!!! ALL OF THEM!!!!
*dies*
He's having SO much fun!!!
XD
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS) DOES any of the audience see/realize what's going on in the Skybox between them? Or is it out of their field of vision?
We wanna know!!!!
(All your fans, I'm sure...)
XD
We wanna know!!!!
(All your fans, I'm sure...)
XD
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loveddd it soo much
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
happy new year and this was also a wonderful chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So great! So wonderful!
Your the BEST!!
Thanks!
Your the BEST!!
Thanks!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco baby!!!!!!!!
*huggles Draco*
And Arthur bloody ROCKS!!!!!!! Draco's gonna get a hint about that posetion dude, isn't he.
What'll happen now!!!
XD
*huggles Draco*
And Arthur bloody ROCKS!!!!!!! Draco's gonna get a hint about that posetion dude, isn't he.
What'll happen now!!!
XD
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch) 42) HAAA HAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! Poor Harry in the mooooorniiiiiing!!!!
*snort*
Yeah, that would be understandable!!! Ahhh, just beautiful.
Good on ya Draco!!! Going through the last of the salve with nerves mostly intact, though Hary's imagination is goin' a tad rampant!!!
And Draco's sweet gesture at the end... Just beautiful!!!
XD
*snort*
Yeah, that would be understandable!!! Ahhh, just beautiful.
Good on ya Draco!!! Going through the last of the salve with nerves mostly intact, though Hary's imagination is goin' a tad rampant!!!
And Draco's sweet gesture at the end... Just beautiful!!!
XD
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was an excellent chapter(43). You have done an interesting thing in making Harry submissive without actually BEING submissive. It's very subtle as opposed to some of the other fics where Draco almost beats him into submission at times, or humiliates him. I really like how the pace of the recovery has sped up a little bit as well, though I'm kinda anxious to delve back into Harry's dark side and see the confrontation that's going to arise from that.
Hope you have a Happy New Year and can update soon!!!
Hope you have a Happy New Year and can update soon!!!