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Sooo need chapter 19! What plan? It's going smoothly?

The way you write about the rape(s) is very ... raw I do hope nothing like that has ever happened to you before as you are right it should never happen to anyone.
It makes for a rather nice story however and you are doing a great job of explaining everything as well as using a good amount of detail.

One thing that I do get a little confused on is at some points I no longer know who is saying what because you have 3 or more people talking without saying which one it is (even if it is in some kind of order)

Also I was wondering if Harry was ever going to get rid of his scars like Sev. said he'd help him do... if he could.
And also what the significants of the tattoos from the founders would play out, or if it was just for the bank vaults to be moved to his name....
if it was just for that then why did they stay?
And for that matter is Harry still wearing the rings of the Potter and Black families'??
Did the weaslys ever thank harry for the account that he opened for them and what has happened to Harry and Mion's relationship with the other Griffs (like Nevil)?

Better slash questions:
GAH WHEN IS THEIR RELATIONSHIP GOING TO START?!?!?!
I was expecting something to happen with it being X-mass and all like them stepping under missile-toe and Harry actually taking the first move to kiss Draco! Or it could be enchanted so who ever is under it has to kiss -evil smile- but nothing has come yet cause you haven't updated yet.... -sobs-

Update soon!

~Ero

p.s. If you have a mailing list my e-mail is eros.pandora@gmail.com

love it

You have to update! I love it! Love it, love it, love it!!! Everything, the attention to detail, the unique plot, you are the absolute best ever!

so great i hope harry gets to like draco soon. i loved it and cant wait for more!!:)XD

wow did i ever miss a lot of chapters. i think i had to go back to chapter 13 to find where i had left off. this story just keeps getting better and better. plz keep writing. hopefully i will kepp up on the updates but who knows considering my classes start next week que lastima! any way great work keep it up. Vladimir Mithrander

I really like this story! It's very interesting how Harry changes. The only thing I wish would happen is to have Draco be with Harry more often...it's taking too long! And I'm sure Harry can use Draco's support. But anywho, I can't wait for more :]

that man has some damn fucked up plans? But it keeps me from guessing what he's gonna do, so i definitely like it and cannot wait for the next chapter.

Loved it! Can't Dumbledore have a painful heart attack or stroke.....something? That way, Harry wouldn't have to kill him, but he would be gone. On the floor..clutching his chest...looking Harry in the eye...realising no one will help him! Realising to late his mistakes! An Avada Kadavra would be to fast and painless! They need a way to have him tried for the spell he put on Harry. The Wizard Court could strip him down to muggle and when he sees he's done for ....bring on the heart attack! Pain! He deserves pain! Then...they can move on to help Harry, get back Sirius, and get Draco and Harry together! Harry needs love! There seem to be a few sparks between Hermione and Snape to. Christmas is a time for miracles. Perform one and kick Dumblefuck's ass! Please!!!! Thanks for the update and letting me rant!

I forgot to vote! Harry could have Draco show him how it is suppose to be.(no pain and lots of pleasure). But, I think neither should be permanent "top". If they find love or pleasure in each other, there is no need for a "top". They can take turns. Therefore, neither has power over the other in any form. They can have an equal and loving relationship full of hot sweaty sex! Both have looks and money, so, make them equal in the bedroom as well.