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by Lucie

person Jilliane
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Stunning. Absolutely stunning.

I sat down to read the first chapter, and then I simply couldn't stop. I have a pounding headache, and I'm tired and my eyes are scratchy, but it was SO worth it! And what an emotional rollercoaster this took me on! I laughed, I cried, I got angry, my heart broke for both Farid/Harry and Severus, and then there was the happy ending. I so love a happy ending. I so love your work. I am SO putting this story on my Recommended Reading list! Thanks so much for a truly epic and spectacular read!
person anniea
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when my best friend told me about this story last year i thought that i would hate the story. but for the past week i have bunkered down and read the whole story and i have got to say that i love it. i wish that there could be a sequel. oh well. keep up the excellent work. *kisses*
person Ash
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shit, that was a good story. almost cried at the end. Love the way you made Harry into a whole new character, it was really cool. And the whole "Potter Children" thing was funny.
person MissGirl
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!----- "And their lovemaking that night was deeply moving for them both in its intensity, and almost poetic in its tenderness."------that line really killed me. I should have gotten a box of tissues when i first started reading this...
person Luie
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was good....GREAT ending!!
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't ususally review in the middle of a completed story, but i needed to so i wouldn't forget my comment :D. . .

i love the story. the emotion in it is amazing. at the moment. . .the piercings really confused me, (just because i was never really sure how many and where they all were. . .)& the language, particularly chapter 19 was very indecisive. sometimes harry suddenly could pronounce english words better, then a few sentences later it was complete crap again (though that may have ended up being a character choice and a bit of a set up).

thanks a bunch for the great story!
person evalhanne
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome story! I really liked how the Death Eaters were all turned into toddlers. That was a nice touch. This was such a different story that what I imangined. I really liked how you took real historical figures and incorporated them into your stories. And I really like how you keep up with your stories. THere are so many that I like, but it's been a year or more since they updated and I lost interest in the story. Thank You for the timely updates.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved every single second of this story. The ending was so cute and Im glad it was a happy one
person Jessica
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I spent last night and today reading your story and just absolutely love your Farid. I went back to see if you had anything more on Farid and Severus, and then realized that you were the author of Dearest Harry. (I must admit, I never look at the names of the author when going to read a fic) and I must say, this story is just as brilliant, if not more so than Dearest Harry. I just love your writing, and get lost in it for days on end at times. I know you'll have me thinking about a foreign language speaking Harry for the next week.

Thank you for this beautiful story!
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was *sniff* the most *sniff* BEAUTIFUL story I have ever read. Some parts made me blush, but it was a good blush. WONDERFUL JOB!

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