rate_review Reviews

I truly hate it when I find the start of such a promising story that is a WIP and usually resist the pull to read until more is posted, but...... your summery drew me in and now I am hooked. I love this so far, very nice flow to your writing, It is hard to put your finger on just what makes a good story and good author, (at least it is for me) but I know it when I see it. and this is definitely the real thing. please update often, You obviously have a good beta, or else you just can write so that I don't notice any mistakes. keep em coming!

please update soon!

:DD

YES! This is my favorite plot-line ever and so far I had been severely disappointed by the archives! In fact I have been holding a bunch of windows open to catch up on fics and another was similar but poorly written. I'm loving this read - it's paced very well and the events and thoughts are believable without being boring. The thought processes are also believable - I'm pretty tired of "I've loved you for so long, Let's shag!" So thank you ^_^ I got to the end of chapter one and, in false hope, refreshed the page since it'd been up a few days, and VOILA a new chapter! I hope you keep updating regularly, I look forward to it!

Interesting...I'm curious about what happens next.

i love love love love this! i can't wait for the future chapters! great job so far...this is an excellent story idea :)