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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Melissa
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! I cannot wait to see what happens! :)
person Dracosgoddess238
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o0o0o0ohhh! I loved it! Keep it up. Although I find it a bit perverse that a 17-18 yr old is hitting on a 14-15 yr old! Thats one thing I hate about the books and movies is that they act too old for their age but I suppose they've grown up too fast with everything but anway I love this story its so interesting with the dancing etc!!!
person Da Voldie Code
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so wonderful I love the story and its plot, keep the chapters coming.
person Chavela
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

person Shilohdarke
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe! perfectly written! I loved this chapter! He totally swept her off her feet, and I think he pretty much did it by being honest about his attraction! For ONCE- score one for Malfoy! YAH!!!!

Loved it... want more soon!

SD
person Bella
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, absolutley beautiful. IS there more? If there is, update soon please. I alyways thought using lyrics in fics was kinda cheesy but you used it really well, go you!
person desra34
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO, SO MUCH!!!!!! thanks.
person ^.^Cat
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I'm so awful at remembering to review! Tsk, tsk I get lazy. But I love this fic! Really you could totally go with a H/Hr or K/Hr, but I can't wait to see more D/Hr action! It's such an interesting premise, I haven't seen it before, and I love how you're keeping it in line with GoF, no easy task I'm sure. But since I'm reviewing I want to recommend another fab D/Hr lemon "Everything you need" by BeautifullyMalicious on the Contraveritas site. Delicious read. Can't wait to see where this one goes! ^.^Cat
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I'm sorry. I meant that those eyes Hermione was looking in were very similar to the eyes that were in the scenes playing out in my mind with me as the main character. *cough*damn that Hermione*cough* Haha sorry for the confusion! Nope.. no plagerism on your part.. Haven't described Draco's gorgeous eyes yet! I'm glad you like the Adrian Pucey part.. I just felt it was important to have a chapter without Draco to show that he will not take over the independent side of Hermione. -Update soon!
person Shez
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITING!!

I love it!

Keep up malfoy n hermione ;)

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